This is not the original of this poem, but a tweaked version with the help of the always lovely
who is a great adviser for my many poetic sufferings.
The original was a bit more wordy, lacked a bit of flow...but I still like it due to the fact that it held my own (and only my) emotion...while posting this one up is better, to me it feels slightly alien because it is not only my emotion behind it.
Still, she was a tremendous help and I tried (thought) about combining the two, but this was a better call to me. Read some of her work at Odins-gift.com, well worth the visit